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Many people don't like it, 
But to me it's all the same, 
I guess City Living, 
Is just A Young Girls' Game

The freshness of heart, 
And the clear cut sound, 
And this is were, 
All emotions are found 

From the darkest alley, 
And the brightest light, 
To the underground world, 
To the tallest height

Dangers await, 
And risks are here, 
We must have an open heart, 
And hide no fear

So don't be sad, 
That you came, 
I guess City Living, 
Is just A Young Girl's Game 









This is just all about how there are lots of people who say that living in the city is terrible! They say that there is to much traffic, and it's noisy, and too many people, but there's a lot of city living that awesome!
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lonely-in-winter Sep 19, 2013  Professional Writer
Loved it! ^_^
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lightbleueyes Sep 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much, Holly! ^^
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lightbleueyes Sep 18, 2013  Student General Artist
^^
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technoattic7 Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice rhyme scheme I love it! I also like how you make a call back to the first stanza, that's always really cool in writing. And the overall feel to this poem is really profound, and almost professional. Truly magnificent, well done!
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lightbleueyes Sep 16, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you Lore! :D I was nervous aout posting this one! I thought it wasn't good enough!
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technoattic7 Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's ironic considering it's my current favorite from you.
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lightbleueyes Sep 16, 2013  Student General Artist
:hug: Thanks! :) Can you do me a small favor and rank my poems from your least favorite to your most favoprite? :3 ^^
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technoattic7 Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure, (From favorite to least favorite) 1. This 2. Show The World 3. Attention 4. So Selfish 5. City Dreams 6. Butterflies 7. 5 More Years 8. Journal 9. Thank You My Enemies. It was really hard to make this, considering all of your poems are pretty good. I had to really think on this little task, but that's the basic gist of my thoughts. Don't stop writing you're doing extraordinarily well!
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lightbleueyes Sep 16, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so muh for doing this! :) I won't stop writing! :D
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